Tuesday, December 24, 2013

I like writing lyrics to music I like, especially jazz groups I like.

Well, this song particularly moved me (after I wrote it), so I thought I'd post it here. It's sad, but that was what I was trying to capture: the loneliness and despair of love gone wrong.

It's from the Rippington's instrumental piece (I Saw Her) Walk Away. If you listen to it on YouTube, ( YouTube Version ) the verses start at the times indicated:



(I watched her) Walk Away
[0:16]
In those times when our love felt sublime
We were both floating on air;
All our days shone so bright they amazed she
melted my cares.

[0:32]
Her smile covered all the
doubts that grew deep down in my trembling heart.
I knew I loved her, I took care of her;
something was falling apart

[0:49]
Days went by and the clouds in the sky
Took away more of the blue
And her smile had been dying a while it
faded from view

[1:05]
What’s wrong I can’t hear the song
we’ve sung since we first became me and you?
What have I done you’re not the same one that
I once thought I clearly knew.

[1:22]
[Chorus 1]
Please don’t take your heart from me
My world will crumble to ashes and dust
Don’t you know if you become free
I will die but I’ll breathe ‘cause I must
stumble on

[Interlude]

[2:56]
Words turn to frowns smiling upside down
I’m numb: pain freezes the warmth of the sun
The day has become a dark night

[3:08]
Don’t you see you are distancing me;
I’m falling further behind
I cry she will not listen to me
her eyes have turned blind


[3:24]
Ice cold took our love and holds me
Frozen in time she’ll no longer stay
She took the warmth “I am leaving” she told me
Then I watched her walk away

[3:41]
Now I’m alone remem’bring
Beautiful love that we shared every day
Sadness is all each new day brings
I must rise up and find another way

[3:56]
Trapped in my thoughts my heart breaks
It felt so right but our love wasn’t real
I tried to give; you could just take
I’ll go on but I’ll take time to heal
And you’re gone…

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