Well, this song particularly moved me (after I wrote it), so I thought I'd post it here. It's sad, but that was what I was trying to capture: the loneliness and despair of love gone wrong.
It's from the Rippington's instrumental piece (I Saw Her) Walk Away. If you listen to it on YouTube, ( YouTube Version ) the verses start at the times indicated:
(I watched her) Walk
Away
[0:16]
In those times when our love felt
sublime
We were both floating on air;
All our days shone so bright they
amazed she
melted my cares.
melted my cares.
[0:32]
Her smile covered all the
doubts that grew deep down in my trembling heart.
doubts that grew deep down in my trembling heart.
I knew I loved her, I took care
of her;
something was falling apart
something was falling apart
[0:49]
Days went by and the clouds in
the sky
Took away more of the blue
And her smile had been dying a
while it
faded from view
faded from view
[1:05]
What’s wrong I can’t hear the
song
we’ve sung since we first became me and you?
we’ve sung since we first became me and you?
What have I done you’re not the
same one that
I once thought I clearly knew.
I once thought I clearly knew.
[1:22]
[Chorus 1]
Please don’t take your heart from
me
My world will crumble to ashes
and dust
Don’t you know if you become free
I will die but I’ll breathe ‘cause I must
stumble on
I will die but I’ll breathe ‘cause I must
stumble on
[Interlude]
[2:56]
Words turn to frowns smiling
upside down
I’m numb: pain freezes the warmth
of the sun
The day has become a dark night
[3:08]
Don’t you see you are distancing
me;
I’m falling further behind
I’m falling further behind
I cry she will not listen to me
her eyes have turned blind
her eyes have turned blind
[3:24]
Ice cold took our love and holds
me
Frozen in time she’ll no longer
stay
She took the warmth “I am
leaving” she told me
Then I watched her walk away
[3:41]
Now I’m alone remem’bring
Beautiful love that we shared
every day
Sadness is all each new day
brings
I must rise up and find another way
[3:56]
Trapped in my thoughts my heart breaks
It felt so right but our love
wasn’t real
I tried to give; you could just take
I’ll go on but I’ll take time to
heal
And you’re gone…
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